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Posted : 10/02/10 / Views : 518 / Replies : 3 /
Chris.Rochester 2 posts last on: 06/02/12 send private reply	Hi guys, This is my first effort. Please have a look and tell me what you think. Regards Chris

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Posted : 02/12/09
ForbesKB 1039 posts last on: 8 hours send private reply	Good effort Chris! However... I would remove the "HIV Positive Hostage" scene as the production values are, to be blunt, questionable...the quality of your acting is fine however the other guy is not! This scene just doesn't do you any favours. Another small issue is the contact details at the end...The rolling text being grey, is lost as it scrolls past your face making it illegible. Would be better if the contact details were static and of a contrasting shade so they can be noted down if required. You even have my mate George in one of the scenes so all in all a good basis to build on.

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Posted : 02/12/09

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Good effort Chris! However...

I would remove the "HIV Positive Hostage" scene as the production values are, to be blunt, questionable...the quality of your acting is fine however the other guy is not! This scene just doesn't do you any favours.

Another small issue is the contact details at the end...The rolling text being grey, is lost as it scrolls past your face making it illegible.

Would be better if the contact details were static and of a contrasting shade so they can be noted down if required.

You even have my mate George in one of the scenes so all in all a good basis to build on.

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Posted : 03/12/09
Chris.Rochester 2 posts last on: 06/02/12 send private reply	Cheers Forbes, I was wondering about those credits, because I lost the white lettering and the black lettering...hmm As for the other scene...I'll replace it soon Cheers again Chris

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Posted : 10/02/10
Lena.Andersson 60 posts last on: 04/01/12 send private reply	Ha ha .... I love that end scene! I would be inclined to put that one at the beginning. I actually agree with Forbes but I like you in the Aids scene so I wouldn't take it out..... I think you could cut it down, I'm told that 3 minutes is the maximum you should have and to quote Francesca Greene 'Leave them wanting more'. L X

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